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Dear insert hospital here,
The one thing most hospital patients lack is a sense of pride. After researching “My spoon”, a device developed by Secom Inc., I have been able create an invention of my own that is able to fix this dilemma. My invention was built to give back some pride, to the people who have been deprived of motion in their arms or legs, otherwise paralyzed. Whether it was a car accident, or an illness, once they become dependent on others for simple jobs such as getting a soup can from the top shelf or even getting fed like a child, a certain cloud of shame drifts above them spinning them into a storm of depression. To help keep your patients in top condition I suggest you buy my invention. DOC.

First of all I am guessing you would like to know what exactly my invention does? Well as I said before, it was built to help the paralyzed gain their pride back as well as keep them from falling into the dark storm of depression. More specifically it was built to help the handicap feed themselves using a remote controlled arm that is fixed on to a small cart. The arm is controlled by a joystick placed near the chin. Just like the older models it works in three ways manual semi-auto and full auto. During manual the user controls the arm completely, semi auto is when the mechanical arm picks up the food but the user brings it to his or her mouth. Unlike the older model the cart can be programmed to travel from room to room as a daily commute either feeding patients or giving the their medicine. Also unlike the original the user has a selection of 2-3 types of food in the machines body, which can keep it warm or cool. My machine also includes a tube type straw connected to a small tank inside DOC, just fill up with the desired drink.

If you were strapped into a chair, seeing your loved ones cry over you while being hand fed, I am guessing that you would at least be slightly depressed. To keep the patients from getting too depressed I have created D.O.C. Depression, mainly effects the mind , but also can harm the body. Sleeping disorders, cramps, pains in the lower back, neck and joints are all part of being depressed. Since hospitals are supposed to keep their patients safe don’t you think it would be a major advantage to buy this mechanical wonder.

One of questions you may be faced with is price. True, DOC is no $19.99 T.V. offer, however my device is more like an investment. By feeding patients, giving them their meds , and even pass out memos. You could save a bundle of money since you wouldn’t need to hire as many nurses.

To make sure no one is injured by the machine, it works on low power. It also stops at a pre programmed position in front of the mouth .

One of the best things about this devise is that is that it’s a snap to learn. Basically, if you now how to work a computer you know how to work this machine. All you do is you the is use touch screen to wirelessly connect it to your computer and type in instructions how to get to each the room, and what to do there.

This is my invention and I hope the you will make smart chose and buy my invention. It’s a great investment, it is extremely safe, user friendly and it will greatly improve the health of your patients. Engineer in training Carlos Cruz III